One moment the skies were clear; the next, rain fled from them in terrified haste. Einur raced for his cave shelter, leaving his sheep, undisturbed by the downpour, still ripping up grass. Reaching the cave, he crouched just inside, shivering β already drenched despite his swift retreat from the open field.
As his shivers subsided, he raised his fingers to his mouth and blew a shrill whistle. Presently there came the beat of wings, and a dark form alighted beyond the cave opening.
βCome here, Efrix,β commanded Einur, and the dragon slithered in. His body fit snugly within the stone walls; he was a small specimen of his kind.
βEinur?β came a second voice from outside.
βIs that you, Gernhr?β
βEinur!β Gernhrβs voice was filled with terror. βYou must come at once!β
Einurβs heart nearly stopped.
Lody.
βMove!β he snapped at Efrix, shoving at the dragonβs scaly side with his hands. Slowly the creature wedged himself back out, Einur shaking with fear behind him.
βHave they taken Lody?β he shouted, taking hold of Gernhrβs shoulders and shaking his friend. βWhere is she?β
Gernhr broke free and shook his head, trying to catch his breath. βNo, no, Einur, not Lody. Einur, your name was drawn!β
Einurβs mind froze in relief at Gernhrβs initial reassurance, the latter part of his statement not registering at once. Then it filtered through.
βMy name?β
The thought of this happening had never once occurred to the boy. Rather, the possibility which had haunted him ever since his little sisterβs birth was that she would be chosen, that she would be taken to the Temple from where no child had ever returned. That Lody would be sacrificed to the Great Achiel.
Not me.
Gernhr was watching him when the dizzy blackness faded from his vision. βYou know what we planned if Lody was chosen, Einur. Itβs little different now itβs you instead of her. You can run off, Einur, live in the wild somewhere. Iβll even come with you, if you want me to.β
He broke off and stared at Einur, whose eyes were glassy and confused.
βYou arenβt going with the IllyriΓ«, are you?β
Einur revived himself. βIβll go right now. But you mustnβt come with me; your mother needs you. She will take care of Lody, no?β
Gernhr nodded. Then he tensed.
βTheyβre coming!β
Einur stood still for three seconds, but he did not have Gernhrβs swift hearing.
βRun! Theyβve tracked you here!β
βEfrix!β called Einur, and quickly embraced his friend. βGoodbye, Gernhr. Tell Aloden I love her, and Iβll come back as soon as I can.β
He jumped onto Efrixβs back and exclaimed, βGo!β
The dragon didnβt move. Einur repeated his order once, twice, panic leaping into his voice.
βWhat are you doing, Einur? Go!β shouted Gernhr.
Einur glanced behind him; the hirelings of the IllyriΓ« were in sight now, coming over a small hillock. There were ten or so, perhaps fifteen. Einur kicked Efrix hard in the sides.
βGo, you stupid creature!β
Still Efrix remained on the ground.
βJust leave him and run!β
The pursuers were only a few hundred feet away. Einur gave them one look and slipped off Efrixβs back, running now for dear life up into the bracken. His path led him up the side of a small mountain, yet his pace slowed not at all. The yells of his enemies were close behind him β with every step he took, he expected to be yanked back. Gradually, however, the shouts grew further away, and then died out altogether. Einur allowed himself one brief pause and looked down the mountainside. The would-be captors had become worn out by the race up the steep slope, and had retreated. He couldnβt see Gernhr anymore; please the Great Achiel he was unharmed.
But wonβt the Great Achiel be enraged that he helped the sacrifice escape? he thought. Yet he could do nothing but turn and go on.
His steps soon became stumbling, and presently rest became imperative. If only Efrix hadnβt been so stubborn, Einur couldβve ridden on him instead. But what a ridiculous thing for the dragon to suddenly do! Why, everyone used dragons as their mounts; the creatures were bred for that very purpose!
The dragon himself landed beside Einur just then.
βYou wicked creature!β the boy told it, and it snorted and nuzzled its snout up against his shoulder. He gave it a slap and repeated his admonishment, but the slap was gentle and the admonishment no harsher.
They settled into positions as comfortable as the rain-soaked ground and Einurβs wet clothes allowed. Einur still made a pretence of being angry; but Efrix led out periodic soft snorts until his master rubbed the top of his scaly head and laughed, βYou ought to be ashamed of yourself!β
They went to sleep with Einur snuggled against Efrixβs warm side.
*****
Einur woke early to find Efrix again gone but the sun returned. As he waited for Efrix to come back β as he was sure the dragon would β he breakfasted off henla, a type of leaf that grew year-round and was very nourishing. The flavour was slightly tart, making the leaves an invigorating morning meal. He was finishing his breakfast when Efrix arrived.
βWhere did you go?β he asked, rubbing his hand up and down Efrixβs back. βHave you found breakfast? Good, letβs go!β
He climbed onto Efrix and the dragon lifted off. The day was beautiful; there wasnβt a cloud anywhere in the azure sky, and a light breeze blew Einurβs blond hair off his shoulders.
The sun showed it was little past noon when they alighted to find some sort of dinner. Einur found nothing but more henla leaves; he ate these whilst Efrix flew off to look for his own dinner.
He woke from a brief nap feeling delightfully warm and extremely relaxed. Through his still-closed eyelids the sunlight streamed into his mind, and he drank it in lazily. Then something blocked the light, and irritably he opened his eyes to see what had happened.
Over him, staring down into his face, stood a man, his hair and beard pale green, and his eyes sea-blue. He wore forest-green robes and carried a long staff engraved with the recurring motif of a fish.
βEinur, is it not?β
Einur scrambled onto his feet. βHow do you know my name?β
βI have my sources,β replied the man. βAnd as I do know it, in fairness I should give you mine. I am Chywion, and some of what I know, you must learn.β
βLearn what?β
βWhat you must know to perform your task.β
Without realizing it, Einur was backing away from the stranger ever so gradually. βWhat task?β
βStop moving!β commanded Chywion, and abruptly Einur noticed his slight movements backward and stopped. βSit, and I will explain everything to you.β
Einur sat in obedience, and Chywion seated himself facing the boy. He laid his staff on the ground beside him and drummed on his cheek with his long fingers, his eyes keenly taking in everything observable about Einur. Einur flushed and scowled.
βI havenβt got all the time in the world. If you have something to tell me, you had better do it quickly.β
A smile darted across Chywionβs lips. βYou should do well,β he said cryptically. βWell. Are you a follower of the cult of the Great Achiel?β
βOf course,β muttered Einur, but the look in his eyes gave the lie to his words.
βDespite your attempt to hide it, you hate the cult and all that goes with it. Do you not?β
Einurβs glance jumped up to meet Chywionβs, then descended again to the ground. He did not reply.
βDo you not?β
Einur was still silent, but Chywion did not look away from him.
βDo you need me to answer?β Einur said at last.
βI know what your answer is, yes, but I do need you to tell me yourself.β
βWhy?β
βWhy do you not wish to answer me?β
βOh, all right. Yes, I hate the Great Achiel, and I hate the IllyriΓ«, and the whole business. Now you can execute me. Thatβs what you want, after all.β
Chywion smiled, a genuine smile of friendship. βThat was the thing furthest from my mind,β he replied.
βWhat was closer, then?β Einur was still argumentative in his tones, but he could not deny to himself that he was interested in this man β or whatever he was β greatly interested. He wanted to know of what task Chywion spoke, and against his wishes he began to believe that Chywion was probably on his sideβ¦ Side? Where did that idea come from?
βAlthough you hate it, do you believe in its truth?β
It was a question Einur had never considered before in his fifteen years, and it gave him pause. Finally he answered, βYes.β
βWhy?β
He was honest. βIβve no idea.β
βGive it up.β
Einur might have hated the cult and wished to leave it, but still he was shocked at the blunt words that suggested such a thing. βGive it up?β
βSo I said.β
βBut why?β
βSo many questions! Not only have you no conviction in your belief, but had you, it were wrongly placed. There is truth in the cult of the Great Achiel only in the sense that there is at least a seed of truth in everything; besides this, there is only evil.β He held up his hand to prevent Einurβs open mouth from generating another enquiry. βNo more questions, Einur! Listen now, and question after. For what I have just stated is the basis of your task.
βI will begin my story far back in the history of Kelyan. Precisely five thousand years after the creation of the world, the Second Tribe of LoRien rebelled against the Master of the Kelyanic Harmony, creating their own demonic cult worship β the very one to which men yet hold this very day. The First Tribe also succumbed to the evil spread by the Second Tribe, but the Third Tribe refused to join with the others. Battle was joined between the Tribes; the First and Second were victorious, and the remnants of the Third escaped intoβ¦ well, into oblivion.β
βDoesnβt anyone know where they went?β exclaimed Einur before Chywion could continue.
The older man shook his head.
βIs my task to find them?β Einur was curiously intrigued by Chywionβs tale, and the mystery of the lost Tribe called to him somehow.
βPartly.β
Einur repressed a cheer. βWhat else?β
βListen.β The rebuke was impressively gentle, but it completely calmed Einurβs excitement. βUnless it is checked, the cult of the Great Achiel will continue to grow in evil, as it has for the past five thousand years. However, it cannot be checked, except by one means.β
Again excitement surged from Einurβs heart to his throat. βHow?β
Chywion did not answer his question directly. βThe first part of your task is to find the lost Third Tribe; more precisely, to find their king. That is the easy part.β
Certainly Einur was excited about this quest, yet he gulped now. βThatβs the easy part? Theyβve been lost for five thousand years and thatβs the easy part?β
βThe second part is more vague. The fall of the cult can be caused only by a sacrifice made by one person.β
βWhat kind of sacrifice?β Visions of the culture of human sacrifice with which heβd grown up flitted through the young manβs head, and he thought of his little sister.
βThat is unknown.β Seeming to sense the uncertainty now tormenting Einur, he added, βBut it is not of the kind of which you are thinking.β
βSo Iβm supposed to find this tribe thatβs been lost practically since the beginning of time, and then someoneβs supposed to make a sacrifice that no one knows any details of.β
βI am glad to see that you have absorbed my instructions so well.β
Einur sat silently for some time. If I do this, I supposedly have a chance of getting rid of the danger to Alodenβ¦ if they donβt draw her name whilst Iβm gone, which is actually quite likely, considering they probably cheat at the drawingβ¦ But this quest thing is such a ridiculous idea! Yet if thereβs a possibility of giving Aloden better chances of surviving her eighth yearβ¦ What else am I going to do with myself anyway? I canβt go back home now, and it canβt really hurt me much to go journeying all over Kelyan. And really, Iβd do anything to destroy something that might hurt Aloden. Doesnβt hurt that itβs an evil cult either.
βIβll go.β
Chywion nodded. βDo you trust me?β
βYes.β
βNo, Einur. Do you trust me?β
Confused, Einur repeated his answer.
βEinur! It is not enough to say you trust me. You must trust me. Think about it first, as you did about accepting your task. I do not wish you to take this lightly. You must not take this lightly.β
Again Einur sat in thought. Yes, he trusted Chywion β to a human degree at least. True, the man was unlike anyone heβd ever met, but this somehow didnβt decrease his trust, instead increasing it; few of the people in Einurβs life had been worthy of trust, and the differences between the IllyriΓ« and Chywion attracted him. Besides this, there was also an aura about Chywion which spoke of something much greater than the man. Yes, he decided, he not only trusted Chywion but also trusted him.
He was about to tell Chywion this when Efrix returned, alighting close beside his master. The dragon observed Chywion with as much suspicion as a creature can gather. Efrix seemed to shrink from the stranger, and if dragons had had the capacity to fear man, Einur would have said that without a doubt, his dragon was terrified of Chywion.
Chywion was frowning. βThat is your dragon, if I am not mistaken.β
Einur nodded briefly, but changed the subject back to the previous one. βI do trust you, sir, with all my heart.β
βAre you willing to prove it?β
Confused, Einur blinked. βYes?β he almost questioned.
Chywion unbuckled something from around his waist and held it out to Einur: a long sword in a plain leather scabbard.
βTake it.β
Einur took it, his stomach suddenly alive with nervousness.
βNow kill the dragon.β
He nearly dropped the sword. βKill Efrix?β
Chywion only stared at him.
βBut heβs my mount, heβs my friend!β
βOn your quest against evil, no dragon is a friend of yours. Did you not say that you trust me?β
Slowly, Einur turned to Efrix. Efrix β yes, it was Efrix, but at the same time it was not Efrix. The dragonβs coal-black eyes were turning red, and its chest blazed orange: the latter a clear sign of anger, the former a phenomenon Einur had never seen in a dragon.
Then Efrix spoke.
βIf you kill me, you too will find death.β
Einur shrieked aloud.
βIf you kill me, you will find despair.β
Einur continued to scream.
βIf you kill me, you will find oblivion.β
βEnough!β
It was Chywionβs voice, but deeper and richer than before; and it quieted the dragon for a moment. Efrix turned his eyes to Chywion, and seemed no longer afraid of the man but contemptuous.
βAnd as for you, you foolβ¦β
βEnough, foul creature!β Chywion cried again. βEinur, kill him now!β
Trembling uncontrollably, Einur stooped and raised the sword, which he had dropped when Efrix first spoke. The fingers of his right hand wrapped convulsively around the hilts, he faced what had been his dragon β and now seemed to be so once more. Efrixβs eyes were again a normal black, and his chest silver-grey like the rest of his scales. Despite what he had just witnessed, a doubt filled his mind. Had it not been but a dream?
Did you not say that you trust me?
He looked towards Chywion, who now did or said nothing to influence the young manβs decision. He looked back at Efrix, who gazed at him with his familiar, submissive, friendly gaze.
Did you not say that you trust me?
A sudden conviction filled Einur, a conviction that by distrusting Chywion, he distrusted something β or someone β far greater. He raised the swordβ¦ and drove it with all his might into Efrixβs neck.


Very intriguiing. I’d read more. As for throwing him right in, I’ve been told and reassured a billion times over that that’s always the right way to go. Cheers.
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Thank you, Matt! I really appreciate your feedback, not to mention the reassurance about throwing Einur straight into the action. π Blessings!
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Well written π
I enjoyed that very much and you built up the tension very well, to the point that the reader will almost certainly forget all about waking up early for work and read the next chapter instead π
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Thanks for the feedback! I was a little dubious about throwing Einur straight into the action, but it seems to have worked. π
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I love it! I can’t wait to read the next chapter!
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